Wednesday, September 3, 2008

Lead #3

Firefighters were injured today while evacuating 41 families from a blazing fire, according to the police. The six-story building where the incident occurred was located at 204 Union Ave.

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camccune said...

Good start -- just tell me how many firefighters were injured. Also, instead of saying "from a blazing fire," give me a little more info. You could say "...while evacuating 41 families from a burning, six-story building."

Leads 1-3: 8/10

September 5, 2008 at 9:13 PM

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