Friday, November 28, 2008

Topical Blog Post #3

While taking a class at De Anza college I enrolled into a class that throughout the quarter, the relatively small class basically decided we wanted to facilitate a group of our peers on what should De Anza do as an institution to help the new coming students feel welcomed.

In the beginning of the quarter, after every one became familiar with each other even though we all knew of each other pre the facilitation class. Our professor gave us as a class, the option to either just learn about the material or go out and be productive with what we have learned in class and use our knowledge of what we are learning to help out the school for the better.

There was no better way to learn than to apply it to a complete facilitation of what we have learned, from breaking up into groups, learning different styles on how to speak to fellow peers and putting in all that we have got.

Even if it means sacrificing some things in the process, as long as our facilitation was taking place, it was our sole responsibility to make sure this event went off without a hitch.

As the facilitation took place, it caused a buzz throughout the school, basically letting our voices as students become heard and that was enough to get the attention of the schools faculty, as well as Shawn Spano a communications professor from San Jose State, to come by and witness this moment.

Following the facilitation, we presented our data to the school faculty, where it was ultimately up to them, whether or not our data was enough to make some change happen in the school. Thankfully, the ideas were embraced and thought well over and some changes were implemented.

1 comment:

camccune said...

Sounds like a good topic for an individual blog post, but this post is a jumble.

For example, your opening sentence/paragraph is 49 words long. It's unclear, repetitive and a run-on sentence.

Your second sentence is a sentence fragment. Your third paragraph is one sentence that's 43 words long.

This piece also lacks specifics. What, exactly, was the "facilitation"? I gather it was some kind of event but I have no idea what it entailed. That's because you don't tell me.

Some changes were implemented? Such as? Be specific.

7/10