Saturday, October 25, 2008

Broadcast news story

Broadcast news story

San Francisco Elites Taint City with a Bad Name

60 seconds

Over 20 thousand women participated in the Nike Women’s Marathon last Sunday in San Francisco.

And 24-year-old Arien O'Connell, a fifth-grade teacher from New York City, ran the fastest time of any of the women, having the fastest time of the marathon, at 2:55:11.

But she didn't win.

Because she was not of the “Elite” class of women participants, that also stated 20 minutes before all the other women participants started.

the officials overlooked her finishing time which was even faster than the woman who won first place by six minutes.

Now, Nike realizes they had made a mistake and recognizes fastest marathon runner as "a" winner, not “The” winner and was awarded the same trophy as the “Elite” woman that won at the marathon.

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1 comment:

camccune said...

Please redo this. It's not in broadcast format (ALL CAPS). Also, your slugline should be short, just 2-3 words.