Immediate and Delayed Identification Leads
Fact Set #1: Pipe fitter
Immediate:
Duane La Chance, A pipe fitter, suffered third-degree burns while installing new pipes on the roof of the Springfield Municipal Power Plant.
Delayed:
An employee of Gross Engineers suffered third-degree burns at
Duane La Chance, 55, was listed in severe condition Wednesday evening in the intensive care unit at Springfield Hospital after he accidentally touched a power line carrying 15,000 volts with a piece of angle iron.
Fact Set #2: Car accident
Immediate:
Two teens in get into a striking accident, one-tenth of a mile north of
Delayed:
James W. Cunning, 20, and Wayne Clay, 19, were in a car accident on U.S. 63 just one-tenth of a mile north of
Cunning was driving south on U.S. 63 in a 2005 Ford Focus. Clay apparently crossed the center line and struck the vehicle that Cunning was driving. Cunning is in satisfactory condition at
1 comment:
1) Good, but stick with describing him as a "pipe fitter" in both versions. You can tell me who his employer is in P2. (4.5/5)
2) You need to focus on the fact that a local person was injured in a two-car accident. The accident is only newsworthy because someone was injured. (3/5)
7.5/10
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